
First of all, never write a poem to a girl as your first message.
Secondly, never start that poem with the term “evening stroke”.

First of all, never write a poem to a girl as your first message.
Secondly, never start that poem with the term “evening stroke”.
Evening… Stroke…
this is a bad poem. I would be forced to respond with a rejection, based on the fact the poet doesn’t seem to understand...
Psh, like you could come up with something as beautiful (read: repulsive) as that text.
You said you liked it!